My opinion on Karma sequence so far and what is left to do

My view is that so far, the sequence is closer to the way I had wished it to be, however not entirely because there are a few effects and transition to be added. I have included the credits and title and it is in order. The scenes are well alocated and placed correctly. However, Although, I have included some effects, I do not think they are enough. I am thinking of adding the 'layered dissolve', 'emotion zoom' and sudden flashes in the park scene where Ivory is getting bullied. I haven't placed the credits in the places they are supposed to be in. And my group and I still have to agree on whether the park scene should be lack and white or in colour.