Monday, 4 March 2013

Rough cut feedback

I was not in the day of the rough cut because I was re-filming the bedroom scene. However from what my group have told me I am aware that the story is not as clear as my group and I thought it would be. It appears to be confusing to the audience because they didn't understand it was a dream and most importantly what was the present and what was the past. Half of the class understood and the other half didn't which is not bad at all but we just have to make sure that they a few parts of the plot. 

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