Editing the construction of the timeline after rough cut

After the feedback from the rough cut, my teacher Dan suggested that me and my group cut down the length of some of the dream scenes to make them more dream like, as he was confused and thought they were the present. Therefore I made some of the footage where Ivory is ripping up a picture in Mercy's dream of a shorter length to make it clearer that Mercy is dreaming this.

00:56 - 1:13 = 17 seconds on Ivory's ripping up picture scene

I think I might try and return to the scenes of Mercy sleeping more throughout this to show that it's a dream.

I did this straight away, also making the lighting darker through editing on Mercy sleeping to show the time of day. I also inserted video transitions of 'luminance map' to fade into the dream so the audience feel like they are fading into Mercy's dream.